GHOST RIDER:NEW GRITTY STYLE EXPERIMENT(bad paper)

Trying a new comic style:Combining two types of black pens.I practicly wanted to get a grittier and faster style.I wanted to integrate this style to a fan comic of ghost rider im planing to do....yeah im planning to do TOO MANY fan comics....AANY WAY what do ya think?It WILL get less messy than this i promiss!